下周要口试 一分钟左右New Year's Resolution2011 is coming,I didn't do a good job in Chinese last year,so I have to make some change in the new year.I am going to do something that can help me to improve my Chinese grades.First,I am going to

下周要口试 一分钟左右New Year's Resolution2011 is coming,I didn't do a good job in Chinese last year,so I have to make some change in the new year.I am going to do something that can help me to improve my Chinese grades.First,I am going to
下周要口试 一分钟左右
New Year's Resolution
2011 is coming,I didn't do a good job in Chinese last year,so I have to make some change in the new year.
I am going to do something that can help me to improve my Chinese grades.
First,I am going to listen to teacher carefully in class and try my best to understand.
Then,I am going to read more books,because I am not so good at writing.I think it is helpful.
Next,I am going to recite some Tang poetry,it is important for me to get a good grade in Chinese.
Besides Chinese,I am going to learn a instrument,flute sounds like a instrument that I want to learn.I think it will be more interesting than play other instruments.Because I think flute has the most wonderful sound.
I hope everyone can do a good job in 2011!
Thank you for your listening.
这是 我问的第二个同样的问题 和上一个内容是不一样的
有什么语法错误请指出.

下周要口试 一分钟左右New Year's Resolution2011 is coming,I didn't do a good job in Chinese last year,so I have to make some change in the new year.I am going to do something that can help me to improve my Chinese grades.First,I am going to
look back the year of 2010,I didn't do a good job at Chinese.so improving my Chinese is the primary goal in 2011 .
First,I have to(take time and effoet to 多花费精力) concentrate myself more carefully in class(listen to teacher 让人产生误解,你的意思是上课认真听讲而不是听老师的话,在线翻译很不准) and try my best to understand.
Then,I am going to read more books,for I am sick of writing.there is an old saying:Reading can take you anywhere.(书中自有黄金屋),I believe it can be helpful.
Next,I plan to recite Tang poetry,it can expand my knowledge and hel me to understand the textbook(你帮助你提高成绩听起来过于直白,嘿嘿)
Besides that,I am going to learn a new skill,flute as a music instrument sounds like a good idea.it can make a good sound and attract me so much.
Finally ,I hope everyone will got a good performance in 2011!
Thank you for your listening.
最后祝你好好学习英语.

flute sounds like a(改为 an) instrument that I want to learn. I think it will be more interesting than play other instruments.

wss

didn't do a good job --连用 didn't do 感觉不顺
in Chinese 好像不对吧-in China（如果是“在语文方面”--那就用 on Chinese）
changes
learn an instrument
than 后面应该是用doing