作业帮大家看看我这句英文,提点建议啊,我写作文呢...With the development of medical science,advanced skill could save more people than before.这句话有语病么?怎么写更好呢?
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大家看看我这句英文,提点建议啊,我写作文呢...With the development of medical science,advanced skill could save more people than before.这句话有语病么?怎么写更好呢?
大家看看我这句英文,提点建议啊,我写作文呢...
With the development of medical science,advanced skill could save more people than before.
这句话有语病么?怎么写更好呢?
大家看看我这句英文,提点建议啊,我写作文呢...With the development of medical science,advanced skill could save more people than before.这句话有语病么?怎么写更好呢?
个人的意见啊, 我觉得用：先进的技术能拯救比以前更多的人有点奇怪,直接说 We 或者 Doctor can save more patient than before due to the fast development of medical science,或者说 since the medical science made a great progress.
With the development of medical science, advanced skills could save more lives than before.
用lives比people更好，skill肯定要用复数skills
要么是skills，要么是the advanced shill
读着有点别扭，不知道在你的作文中这句话的重点是要说明什么问题，似乎这样修改更符合英文句子的感觉。
Nowadays, people benefit a lot from the progress of medical science and technology.
前面一句没问题。
后面一句不是很妥当，见上面的表述。
主要是两句之间的逻辑也有问题。
你想表达什么意思？
路过
With the development of medical science , the advanced skill could save more people than before.
再加个the就对了，其他完全正确。
advanced skill could save more people than before.应该改成“more people could be saved by advanced skill”