英语翻译我的毕业论文的摘要需要翻译成英语,请帮忙看看.下面是摘要正文：自从姚明2002年以新秀状元身份加盟NBA以来,掀起了中国的全民NBA热,加之国内CBA联赛的职业化日渐发展,我国篮球市

英语翻译我的毕业论文的摘要需要翻译成英语,请帮忙看看.下面是摘要正文：自从姚明2002年以新秀状元身份加盟NBA以来,掀起了中国的全民NBA热,加之国内CBA联赛的职业化日渐发展,我国篮球市
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我的毕业论文的摘要需要翻译成英语,请帮忙看看.下面是摘要正文：
自从姚明2002年以新秀状元身份加盟NBA以来,掀起了中国的全民NBA热,加之国内CBA联赛的职业化日渐发展,我国篮球市场逐渐火暴.在此大环境下,相关的篮球报道市场化也逐渐成型,转一转书报亭,各式篮球类杂志,《灌篮》《扣篮》《篮天下》《篮球俱乐部》《篮球》等林林总总十几类,报纸方面,则由《篮球先锋报》、《篮球报》、《体育天地MVP》三家瓜分市场.相对篮球类杂志的专业化、精品化,篮球类报纸更平民化,价格更低廉,发行量更大,更普及,本文从对现今发行的三种篮球报纸的比较和分析,肯定其取得成绩和经验的同时,试图分析其中的不足之处,从而对篮球报纸这种在我国媒体发展历史并不长的专业报道提出有益的观点与意见.
下面是我自己翻译的其中的几句,以供参考：
Since drafted by Houston in the First Round (first pick overall) of the 2002 NBA Draft,Yao Ming made the chinese people in nba hot.With the league of Chinese Basketball Association is developmenting,our basketball market is hotting.In this context,the related commercial reports of basketball game was molded.Go to a newspaper stand,you will find many kinds of basketball magazine,such as “Stuff Inside NBA””SLAM””Dime”” Basketball Club”” Basketball”.The professional basketball newspaper market,shape for “Basketball Pioneers”” Basketball News China”and”51 MVP’.
剩余的最后2句有排比句,该怎样翻译?我翻译好的几句又有哪里需要修改的?
另：如果是很专业的团队师傅来帮忙的话,请留意一下几个常用的术语,如Chinese Basketball Association（CBA）.+里面几种杂志、报纸的英文译名我都已经核对过是正确的

英语翻译我的毕业论文的摘要需要翻译成英语,请帮忙看看.下面是摘要正文：自从姚明2002年以新秀状元身份加盟NBA以来,掀起了中国的全民NBA热,加之国内CBA联赛的职业化日渐发展,我国篮球市
你的译文还有很大进步的空间.
首先你的汉语逻辑就有点小问题.
篮球职业化,nba的影响是我国篮球市场火爆的原因,姚明只是推动了这个火爆.
Together with the influence of NBA, the influence that was reinforced by the first pick of 2002 NBA Draft, Yao Ming, the development of Chinese Basketball Association（CBA）and its full professionalisation have boosted basketball a booming business(不要看到市场就是market).In this context, journalism related to basketball has seen its propsrity. Publications in this respect have been popular: as many as more than ten periodicals being “Stuff Inside NBA”, SLAM”, ”Dime”,” Basketball Club”,” Basketball” and so forth and three main newspapers(这里指种类,报纸就可数了) being “Basketball Pioneers”” Basketball News China”and ”51 MVP’.
Compared with basketball perodicals’ professional and high-end style,(所谓“化”是汉语中最难翻译的一种表现之一) the style of basketball newspaper is amateur and unexpensive, （前后逻辑关系）thus resulting in more issues and larger popularity.Hereby, through the analyses and comparison of three newspaper, the essay aims to confirm its strong points and beneficial experience on the one hand and attempts to position its drawbacks in its development on the other hand, trying to offerconducive point-of-views and suggestions to basketball newspaper, the newly-born genre in the history in China’s media industry.