求英文纠错.Ing.sorry about that night.i know i was hurt you.i can't leave you .i try to forget you .but i can't .nobody can tell me why it is.i think just beause i'm really love you and care you .after i said lastnight.i start to miss you .miss

求英文纠错.Ing.sorry about that night.i know i was hurt you.i can't leave you .i try to forget you .but i can't .nobody can tell me why it is.i think just beause i'm really love you and care you .after i said lastnight.i start to miss you .miss
求英文纠错.
Ing.
sorry about that night.
i know i was hurt you.
i can't leave you .
i try to forget you .
but i can't .
nobody can tell me why it is.
i think just beause i'm really love you and care you .
after i said lastnight.
i start to miss you .
miss you everytime when i was working and walking.
i don't know how to say about everything.
sorry .
sometime i feel i'm really a fool.
the poor English.
and i really want slap my face .
that make you be sad.
i still love you so much.
that time .
you said i made you cry.
my heart is so pain.
but i can't speak out of it.
so soryy.i love you .
i'm always waiting for you come back.
and come together again.
i want you stay at my side all time.
i swear.
i would like to embrace you tightly.
console you when you sad .
and smile when you happy.
i have pain in my heart.
when i tryp this message.
please.ing.
forgive me .
i never do that again.
Ing.
i miss you .

求英文纠错.Ing.sorry about that night.i know i was hurt you.i can't leave you .i try to forget you .but i can't .nobody can tell me why it is.i think just beause i'm really love you and care you .after i said lastnight.i start to miss you .miss
我的修改（其实,诚意是最重要的,如果她对你还有情,即便有小错误,她也会感动的.祝有情人终成眷属!）
Ing.
sorry about that night.
i know i hurt you.
i cann’t leave you .
i tried to forget you .
but i can't make it.
nobody can tell me the reason.
i think it is just beause i really love you and care you .
after i left lastnight.
i started to miss you .
missed you everytime when i was working or walking.
i don't know how to express all of these
I am sorry .
sometime i think i'm really a fool.
my English is poor.
I even want to slap my face .
when I realise that I made you sad.
i still love you so much.
at that time .
you said i made you cry.
my heart is so painful.
but i can't speak out.
I am so sorry
i love you .
i'm waiting for your coming back
all the time.
and for that we were together again.
i want you to stay by my side,
all the time.
i swear.
i will embrace you tightly.
console you when you are sad .
and smile when you are happy.
I was painful
when i was tryping this message.
please.ing.
forgive me .
I will never do that again.
Ing.
i miss you .

恩？是给别人的情信吧，写的很有水准，应该没什么错，你可以用翻译网翻译看看，注意一点翻译出来的文体可能不一样，别着急，因为英语有倒装句，如what is this?中文：这是什么？而翻译的可能是：什么是这个。祝你成功！

sorry about that night.
i know i hurt you.
i can't leave you .
i've tried to forget you .
but i failed .
nobody can tell me why .
i think it's just beause i really love you an...

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sorry about that night.
i know i hurt you.
i can't leave you .
i've tried to forget you .
but i failed .
nobody can tell me why .
i think it's just beause i really love you and care about you .
after last night.
i begin to miss you .
miss you everytime when i was working and walking.
i don't know what to say .
but sorry .
sometimes i feel i'm really a fool.
the poor English.
and i really want to slap my face .
that make you so sad.
i still love you so much.
that time .
you said i made you cry.
my heart is so painful.
i just can't speak it out.
so soryy.i love you .
i'm always waiting for you to come back.
come back to me again.
i want you stay at my side all time.
i swear.
i would like to embrace you tightly.
console you when you sad .
and smile when you happy.
i have pain in my heart.
when i tryp this message.
please.ing.
forgive me .
i never do that again.
Ing.
i miss you .

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