求高手改英语作文帮忙找出错误及原因,写出修改后的结果.My View on the Post-graduate CrazeRecently,graduates are too crazy on the entrance examination of the Postgraduate.As i know .over twice of stuents than 4 years ago decided

求高手改英语作文帮忙找出错误及原因,写出修改后的结果.My View on the Post-graduate CrazeRecently,graduates are too crazy on the entrance examination of the Postgraduate.As i know .over twice of stuents than 4 years ago decided
求高手改英语作文
帮忙找出错误及原因,写出修改后的结果.
My View on the Post-graduate Craze
Recently,graduates are too crazy on the entrance examination of the Postgraduate.As i know .over twice of stuents than 4 years ago decided to do that.
what's leads to the crazy?In the past ,people can get a satisfied job after grauate from a college .But recntly,we can't imagine how firce the competition is to get a job.There are 650million graduates in next summer.Therefore,to be a post-graduate is a good way for release stress.Scondly,peope are more increasingly recongnise the importance of knowledge.To enrich their knowledge,they'll attempt to be a post graduate.Confront so many advantages ,people surge on that way.
For myself,i'm much eger to find a job after graduate.Because compared to the master's degree,working tend to be more interesting for me .
本人英语基础很差,都是一知半解的.学了这么多年的英语,用起来还是不知所措的.

求高手改英语作文帮忙找出错误及原因,写出修改后的结果.My View on the Post-graduate CrazeRecently,graduates are too crazy on the entrance examination of the Postgraduate.As i know .over twice of stuents than 4 years ago decided
My View on the Post-graduate Craze
标题太老套,一眼就让人看透内容：什么~~研究生热之我见,我眼里的研究生热...改成： A big big craze (in China) ,让人去猜你的内容
Recently,graduates are too crazy on the entrance examination of the Postgraduate. 把crazy on 改成crazy for 或者crazy with,地道点,没be crazy on 的表达式.
over twice of stuents than 4 years ago decided to do that.
要表达的意思是：今年打算考研的人比4年前多了20%吧?
超过2成要用more than 20%(twenty percentages),汗
There are 20% more students deciding to do that than whose 4 years ago.
what's leads to the crazy?
汗,改what lead it to be crazy?
In the past ,people can get a satisfied job after grauate from a college .
grauate改grauating ,a去掉,大学毕业不需要说成从一所大学毕业,拗口.
There are 650 million graduates in next summer.
in去掉或者 in后面 + the
Therefore,to be a post-graduate is a good way for release stress.
头重脚轻,学过it形式主语吧?
改it is a good way for release stress to be a post-graduate .
peope are more increasingly recongnise the importance of knowledge.
这么中式英语的,汗,中文你说更加可以不带比较的对象,英语你用比较级就要规矩点,不然人家不知道你在和谁比more,还有动词时态.
peope are more increasingly recongnising the importance of knowledge than before.
Confront so many advantages ,people surge on that way.
汗,主谓搭配,surge自创用法牛,我建议你改名词用
Confronted with/Confronting so many advantages ,a surge of postgraduate craze is on the horizon.
For myself,i'm much eger(错别字) to find(强调结果,要过程,汗) a job after graduate（动词时态）.
崩溃－ －!
AS for/to me(不需要强调self),I'm much eager to look for /eager for a job after graduating.
Because compared to the master's degree,working tend to be more interesting for me .
稍微改下tend 变tends,就这句还有点水准~~
您贵庚啊~~~