明天就考四级了,请帮我改篇作文吧!谢谢!Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below

明天就考四级了,请帮我改篇作文吧!谢谢!Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below
明天就考四级了,请帮我改篇作文吧!谢谢!
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1）近年来出现大学生就业难的现象
2）产生这一现象的原因
3）如何解决这一问题
College Students' Job Hunting
With respect to the phenomenon that college students nowadays have more difficulty in finding a job with a decent pay or a job which meets their essential needs, I assume that we need to have an insight into it.
As there is a growing concern over the problem among the public, I reckon that these simple but thought-provoking reasons account for it. Topping the list is that the job opportunities have decreased in recent years on account of the global economic crisis. Only if companies reduce the number of the posts and excute some redundancies can they readily adapt themselves to the new circumstances. In addition, the high requirements of a job play an indispensable role as well. Considering that more and more students have a tendency to find a job, companies are quite delighted in that they are more liable to select better emplyees by means of improving the requirements of a job.
In dealing with this problem, I believe that not only student's own capacity is taken into consideration, but the government is also responsible for it. What the government needs to do is to implement some policies to reduce the rate of umemployment and underemployment, but not to leave the students to their own devices or turn a blind eye to the serious phenomenon. Undoubtedly, we students should also broaden our horizen, open up our mind, strengthen our spiritual construction, and so forth. Only in this way can we get rid of unemployment and contribute to the socialist modernization.
这是英语普通4级,不是专四.

明天就考四级了,请帮我改篇作文吧!谢谢!Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below
不好意思,因为我已经已经工作了,周五晚上睡的就比较早,没看到你的留言.没考过四级,不知道你现在考完了没有,希望顺利.其实四级还是专四的作文没什么区别.主要要求还是把事情说清楚,没有语法错误而已.我看到你比较喜欢用词组和复杂句,可能是对自己的英语水平也比较有信心.但是个人建议词组要灵活运用,否则会给人感觉很僵硬,复杂句也尽量少用,容易出现语法错误以及歧义.其实我上学的时候也这样,这是个过度的过程.最后希望你考试成功.
more difficulty---more difficulties
a job with a decent pay or a job---重复还是笔误?
Which 是 that后面的内容还是a job?指代不清,所以一个句子里尽量只用一个which 或一个that
With respect to 通常后接一个事物的某个方面或者影响这个事物的某个方面.这个你可以多查查有with respect to 的句子. 所以把这个词组放在一篇文章的开头,而且后面跟的是文章的主旨非常别扭.你可以说in terms to,或者开门见山描述这种情况
In the past, at least past 20 years, people always equated college graduates with decent jobs. However, nowadays, facts have shown that it becomes increasingly difficult for college students to get even a common job. What's more, society likes to label on them by bookish, naïve, or daydreamer, etc. According to these key words we can find some hints from the graduates part that why it seems tougher for them to find a good job. Meanwhile, the reducing of the job opportunity makes the situation worse that even many competent graduates also could not get a decent job. In the following passages I will mainly discus college graduates’ job pressures from the society part.