求高手帮忙修改英语作文In this picture,the son is talking to his father about his concern about the nuclear waste,but his father told him that if he can empty the dustbin here,he can do anything!The picture telling us that we have to concer

求高手帮忙修改英语作文In this picture,the son is talking to his father about his concern about the nuclear waste,but his father told him that if he can empty the dustbin here,he can do anything!The picture telling us that we have to concer
求高手帮忙修改英语作文
In this picture,the son is talking to his father about his concern about the nuclear waste,but his father told him that if he can empty the dustbin here,he can do anything!The picture telling us that we have to concern with our daily life.Especially those are just little things but very important things.
In our daily life,we always listen to people talk with each other.However they usually escape from the real world.May be these people can not successful.In my opinion,as a university student,we should from little things.From little things,big things grow.If they can complete things around their daily life well one by one,you will become greater and greater.No rules,no standards.So sweep your house before conquering the world.
我知道有很多地方写的不好,请多多帮助,

求高手帮忙修改英语作文In this picture,the son is talking to his father about his concern about the nuclear waste,but his father told him that if he can empty the dustbin here,he can do anything!The picture telling us that we have to concer
时态自己改 一致
concern 改成 concerning
telling 改成 tells
concern with 改成 focus on
those little things might be very important ones.
we always listen to people who talk with each other.
However they usually escape the reality
Maybe these people won‘t be successful.
as a university student,we should start from
minor work
Big things are all consisted of trifle ones
If we can accomplish things around our daily life well one by one,we will become better and better.

talking to改成talking with
father told him that if he can empty the dustbin here 里 can 改为could 你的作文里有很多碎片性的错误 太chinglish了