谁能告诉我这篇自我介绍有没有语法上的错误?Hello,everyone!I am glad to join the English spoken competition.MY name is ***.I major in ENGLISH .I AM AN OPTIMISTIC GIRL WITH A VARIETY OF INTERESTES.I AM FOND OF GOING SHOPPONG,PLAYING T

谁能告诉我这篇自我介绍有没有语法上的错误?Hello,everyone!I am glad to join the English spoken competition.MY name is ***.I major in ENGLISH .I AM AN OPTIMISTIC GIRL WITH A VARIETY OF INTERESTES.I AM FOND OF GOING SHOPPONG,PLAYING T
谁能告诉我这篇自我介绍有没有语法上的错误?
Hello,everyone!I am glad to join the English spoken competition.MY name is ***.I major in ENGLISH .I AM AN OPTIMISTIC GIRL WITH A VARIETY OF INTERESTES.I AM FOND OF GOING SHOPPONG,PLAYING THE PIANO AND LEARNING ENGLISH.IN ADDITION ,I AM INTERESTED IN SPORTS.THAT IS ALL ,THANK YOU .还有 谁知道 THAT'S ALL的音标?一分钟读这样会不会来不及?

谁能告诉我这篇自我介绍有没有语法上的错误?Hello,everyone!I am glad to join the English spoken competition.MY name is ***.I major in ENGLISH .I AM AN OPTIMISTIC GIRL WITH A VARIETY OF INTERESTES.I AM FOND OF GOING SHOPPONG,PLAYING T
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Hello everyone! I am glad to join this English speaking competition. My name is ***. I major in English and I am an optimistic girl with a variety of interests. My hobbies are shopping, playing the pi...

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Hello everyone! I am glad to join this English speaking competition. My name is ***. I major in English and I am an optimistic girl with a variety of interests. My hobbies are shopping, playing the piano and learning English. In addition, I am interested in sports. That's about it. Thank you!
我没什么改,只是给你一些参考句子
I AM FOND OF GOING SHOPPONG,PLAYING THE PIANO AND LEARNING ENGLISH. > 我建议 "My hobbies are shopping, playing the piano and learning English." 让您参考参考.
THAT IS ALL > 改成 "That's about it" 因为比较友善的感觉.

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你好，看了一遍，还是有些问题需要注意的，我写在下边了希望你看看。
join theEnglish spoken competiton---应该改为 take part in English speeking competition,
I major in English----最好改为--My major is English
Hello, everyone! I am ...

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你好，看了一遍，还是有些问题需要注意的，我写在下边了希望你看看。
join theEnglish spoken competiton---应该改为 take part in English speeking competition,
I major in English----最好改为--My major is English
Hello, everyone! I am glad to take part in this English speeking competition, My name is xxx, My major is English, I am an optimistic girl with a variety of interests. I am fond of going shopping, playing the piano and learning English. In addition, I am interested in sports. that's all!

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Hello,everyone!I am glad to join the spoken English competition.MY name is ***.I major in ENGLISH .I AM AN OPTIMISTIC GIRL WITH A VARIETY OF hobbies. I AM FOND OF GOING SHOPPONG,PLAYING THE PIANO AN...

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Hello,everyone!I am glad to join the spoken English competition.MY name is ***.I major in ENGLISH .I AM AN OPTIMISTIC GIRL WITH A VARIETY OF hobbies. I AM FOND OF GOING SHOPPONG,PLAYING THE PIANO AND LEARNING ENGLISH. IN ADDITION ,I AM INTERESTED IN SPORTS. THAT IS ALL , THANK YOU.
口语比赛应该是the spoken English competition
WITH A VARIETY OF INTERESTES最好改成 WITH A VARIETY OF hobbies
THAT'S ALL的音标 是什么意思
一分钟读起来应该有点短

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