高一英语改错 Dear Jack,I'm middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother.She is a doctor,whom works very hard.She is strict in me,but she is too busy with her work that she found little time to talk to me.I love her an

高一英语改错 Dear Jack,I'm middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother.She is a doctor,whom works very hard.She is strict in me,but she is too busy with her work that she found little time to talk to me.I love her an
高一英语改错
Dear Jack,
I'm middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother.She is a doctor,whom works very hard.She is strict in me,but she is too busy with her work that she found little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little of afraid of her because she loses her temper easy.I don't know how to communicate with her.Maybe that's why we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feeling and thoughts.I hope we can know more about each other and understand
each other well.I do hope we'll be closer.What can I do?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Tom
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高一英语改错 Dear Jack,I'm middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother.She is a doctor,whom works very hard.She is strict in me,but she is too busy with her work that she found little time to talk to me.I love her an
Dear Jack,
I'm 【a】middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother.She is a doctor,whom【who】 works very hard.She is strict in【with】 me,but she is too busy with her work that she found【has] little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little of 【去掉】afraid of her because she loses her temper easy【easily】.I don't know how to communicate with her.Maybe that's why we have【did us】 seldom sat down and exchanged 【exchange】our feeling【feelings】 and thoughts.I hope we can know more about each other and understand
each other well【better】.I do hope we'll be closer.What can I do?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Tom

I'm a【1】 middle middle school student.
She is a doctor,that【2】 works very hard.
She is strict with 【3】me,but she is so 【4】busy with her work that she found little time to talk to me.
I lov...

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I'm a【1】 middle middle school student.
She is a doctor,that【2】 works very hard.
She is strict with 【3】me,but she is so 【4】busy with her work that she found little time to talk to me.
I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little 【5】 afraid of her because she loses her temper easily。【6】
I don't know how to communicate with her.Maybe that's why we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings【7】and thoughts.I hope we can know more about each other and understand
each other better【8】.I do hope we'll be closer.What can I do?
Look【9】 forward to your reply。
Your【10】 sincerely
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Dear Jack,
I'm 【a】middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem 【problems】with my mother.She is a doctor,whom 【who】works very hard.She is strict in 【with】me,but she is too 【so】b...

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Dear Jack,
I'm 【a】middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem 【problems】with my mother.She is a doctor,whom 【who】works very hard.She is strict in 【with】me,but she is too 【so】busy with her work that she found 【finds】little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little of 【去掉前面这个of】afraid of her because she loses her temper easy【easily】. I don't know how to communicate with her.Maybe that's why we have 【去掉have】 seldom sat【sit】 down and exchanged【exchange】 our feeling 【feelings】and thoughts.I hope we can know more about each other and understand
each other well.I do hope we'll be closer.What can I do?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Tom
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I'm a middle school 。。。
whom works very 改成who works very
strict in me 改成at me
but she is 改成and she is
too busy 改成so busy
in my studies 改成study
she found little 改成find
of...

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I'm a middle school 。。。
whom works very 改成who works very
strict in me 改成at me
but she is 改成and she is
too busy 改成so busy
in my studies 改成study
she found little 改成find
of afraid 去掉of
temper easy 改成easily
feeling and thoughts改成feelings
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