作业帮麻烦看一下这个句子的语病（07年六级写作）Since the presence of television,our imagination of digital world has more and more approaching becoming true.我原本的意思是“自从电视出现后,我们想象中的数字化世界
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麻烦看一下这个句子的语病（07年六级写作）Since the presence of television,our imagination of digital world has more and more approaching becoming true.我原本的意思是“自从电视出现后,我们想象中的数字化世界
麻烦看一下这个句子的语病（07年六级写作）
Since the presence of television,our imagination of digital world has more and more approaching becoming true.
我原本的意思是“自从电视出现后,我们想象中的数字化世界已经越来越接近实现.”但我感觉more and more approaching 恐怕不能这么用.麻烦给我看看.
麻烦看一下这个句子的语病（07年六级写作）Since the presence of television,our imagination of digital world has more and more approaching becoming true.我原本的意思是“自从电视出现后,我们想象中的数字化世界
Since the presence of television,our imagination of digital world has increasingly approached the reality.
Since the presence of television, our imagination of digital world is becoming true./ on the way to coming true.
Since television appeared, the digital world in our minds has been more and more realised.