求英文诗人达人翻译我写了一首诗歌，因英文功底不佳，无法翻译为英文，请达人帮忙。------------------------------------------------------------------------《一路，绽蓝》每一个思绪交汇都凝结成了一

求英文诗人达人翻译我写了一首诗歌，因英文功底不佳，无法翻译为英文，请达人帮忙。------------------------------------------------------------------------《一路，绽蓝》每一个思绪交汇都凝结成了一
求英文诗人达人翻译
我写了一首诗歌，因英文功底不佳，无法翻译为英文，请达人帮忙。
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《一路，绽蓝》
每一个思绪交汇都凝结成了一颗石子，

每一次情感的迸发都融化成了沥青，

而你一直在我前方跑着，

我追着追着——

身后就有了一条公路。

你回眸一笑我才发现，

天从没这么蓝过，

一辆白色的汽车从我身边经过，

我把心与微笑放在车上，

任由它驶入那一片蓝，

蓝的尽头——

你俯着身子笑。
---------------------------一下是机器的翻译，很多词语运用的过于生硬--------------------------
Every mind intersection are condensed into a stone,
Every time the release of emotion are melted into asphalt,
And you have in front of me running,
I chased chasing --
There is a road behind.
I found you with a smile,
Days never so blue,
A white car passed me by,
My heart is with smile on the car,
Let it into the blue,
The end -- blue
Bending your smile.

求英文诗人达人翻译我写了一首诗歌，因英文功底不佳，无法翻译为英文，请达人帮忙。------------------------------------------------------------------------《一路，绽蓝》每一个思绪交汇都凝结成了一
还有一个是大诗人庞德Ezra Pound的翻译；他的翻译很不忠实,但也因此使得对于我们现代人来说,也许简单地翻译成下面的英文就可以了： 执子之手,与

All the way, "bloomed blue
Each intersection thoughts are setting became a stone,
Each time the emotion of outburst would melt became asphalt,
And you have been my ran ahead,
I ran aft...

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All the way, "bloomed blue
Each intersection thoughts are setting became a stone,
Each time the emotion of outburst would melt became asphalt,
And you have been my ran ahead,
I ran after the chasing the--
Behind have a road.
You return to mou a smile I found out,
Day never so blue,
A white ford cars from the past me,
I put my heart and smile on the car,
Let it into that a blue,
Blue end--
You laugh her body.

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An Azure Road
Many a mind once meets up, they solidify into stones.
Many a feeling once bursts out, they melt into bitumen.
You are running ahead
And I after—
So that a road may ex...

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An Azure Road
Many a mind once meets up, they solidify into stones.
Many a feeling once bursts out, they melt into bitumen.
You are running ahead
And I after—
So that a road may extend behind.
When you smile to me I find
The sky more azure than before.
There passes a white car
Where both my heart and smile are carefully placed.
I drive it up to the azure
Or the end of it—
You bend, smiling.

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