求英语大神做一道改错题During the winter vacation,I did something differently.I got a job at a restaurant and worked there for a cleaner.I worked eight hours a day for two weeks.The job was bored and seemed endless,and it made me such tired

求英语大神做一道改错题During the winter vacation,I did something differently.I got a job at a restaurant and worked there for a cleaner.I worked eight hours a day for two weeks.The job was bored and seemed endless,and it made me such tired
求英语大神做一道改错题
During the winter vacation,I did something differently.I got a job at a restaurant and worked there for a cleaner.I worked eight hours a day for two weeks.The job was bored and seemed endless,and it made me such tired that I nearly stopped it halfway.Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to home late into the night.I felt exhausted but couldn’t fell asleep almost every night.One day,my parents asked me not go to that restaurant any more,but I insisted I should go.Finally,I finished a job before the new school term began.Although I didn’t earn much money,I am very happy.I think it was really a successful experience,that I should remember for ever.

求英语大神做一道改错题During the winter vacation,I did something differently.I got a job at a restaurant and worked there for a cleaner.I worked eight hours a day for two weeks.The job was bored and seemed endless,and it made me such tired
During the winter vacation,I did something differently.I got a job at a restaurant and worked
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there for a cleaner.I worked eight hours a day for two weeks.The job was bored and seemed
as boring
endless,and it made me such tired that I nearly stopped it halfway.Every day I started off for
so off去掉
work early in the morning and got to home late into the night.I felt exhausted but couldn’t fell
got变 went fall
asleep almost every night.One day,my parents asked me not go to that restaurant any more,
加to
but I insisted I should go.Finally,I finished a job before the new school term began.Although I
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didn’t earn much money,I am very happy.I think it was really a successful experience,that I
am变was
should remember for ever.

改的不多，总体来说写的不错。
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During the winter vacation, I did something differently. I got a job at a restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked...

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改的不多，总体来说写的不错。
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During the winter vacation, I did something differently. I got a job at a restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for two weeks. The job was boring and seemed endless, and it made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to home late into the night. I felt exhausted but couldn’t fell asleep almost every night. One day, my parents asked me not to go to that restaurant any more, but I insisted that I should go. Finally, I finished the job before the new school term began. Although I didn’t earn much money, I was very happy. I think it was really a successful experience that I should remember for ever.

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During winter vacation, I did something differently. I got a job at a restaurant and worked
different
there for a cleaner....

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During winter vacation, I did something differently. I got a job at a restaurant and worked
different
there for a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for two weeks. The job was bored and seemed
as boring
endless, and it made me such tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. Every day I started off for
so off去掉
work early in the morning and got to home late into the night. I felt exhausted but couldn’t fell
got变 went fall
asleep almost every night. One day, my parents asked me not go to that restaurant any more,
加to
but I insisted I should go. Finally, I finished a job before the new school term began. Although I

didn’t earn much money, I am very happy. I think it was really a successful experience, that I
变wa
During the winter vacation, I did something differently. I got a job at a restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for two weeks. The job was boring and seemed endless, and it made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to home late into the night. I felt exhausted but couldn’t fell asleep almost every night. One day, my parents asked me not to go to that restaurant any more, but I insisted that I should go. Finally, I finished the job before the new school term began. Although I didn’t earn much money, I was very happy. I think it was really a successful experience that I should remember for

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错误在括号处标明，总共十处错误，保证准确率！
和楼上答案都不一样哦！
During the winter vacation, I did something (differently改成different). I got a job at a restaurant and worked there (for改成as) a cleaner. I worked eight hour...

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错误在括号处标明，总共十处错误，保证准确率！
和楼上答案都不一样哦！
During the winter vacation, I did something (differently改成different). I got a job at a restaurant and worked there (for改成as) a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for two weeks. The job was (bored改成boring) and seemed endless, and it made me (such改成so) tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got (去掉to) home late into the night. I felt exhausted (but改成and) couldn’t (fell改成fall) asleep almost every night. One day, my parents asked me not go to that restaurant any more, but I insisted I should go. Finally, I finished (a改成the) job before the new school term began. Although I didn’t earn much money, I am very happy. I think it (was改成is) really a successful experience, (that改成which) I should remember for ever.
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