Whereas the bone embraced many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.如果错,错在哪?该如何改正?The bone embraces many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.是正确的

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Whereas the bone embraced many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.如果错,错在哪?该如何改正?The bone embraces many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.是正确的

Whereas the bone embraced many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.如果错,错在哪?该如何改正?The bone embraces many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.是正确的
Whereas the bone embraced many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.
如果错,错在哪?该如何改正?
The bone embraces many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.
是正确的,那么请问
Whereas the bone embraced many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.
如果错,错在哪?该如何改正?

Whereas the bone embraced many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.如果错,错在哪?该如何改正?The bone embraces many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.是正确的
The bone embraces many microscopic canals,allowing the passage of nerve fibers and blood vessels.是正确的,allowing是起补充说明作用的成分.
加上whereas就不对了,因为上面的句子本来是完整的,加上whereas之后就变成了从句,但后面又没有主句,句子就变得不完整了.
如果要修改,可以将allowing改成it allows,这样后面部分就不是补充说明的ing成分,而是变成了从句.但这只是语法上正确而已,意思恰当与否还另当别论.

不对,whereas 应该去掉,因为它是用来对比的。这里没有对比的含义。

好像不对,但没读懂你要说什么,所以不知道怎么改

回答者: 俊雅逸晖 - 榜眼 十二级 11-27 16:44
说的很好,也很详细!