这篇英语文章有什么语法错误Good morning,dear teacher and my friends.it’s a very interesting topic today.I think my Dad was a hero for me when I was a young child. We'd go fishing, walks, and other fun things for a kid. Every child ha

这篇英语文章有什么语法错误Good morning,dear teacher and my friends.it’s a very interesting topic today.I think my Dad was a hero for me when I was a young child. We'd go fishing, walks, and other fun things for a kid. Every child ha
这篇英语文章有什么语法错误
Good morning,dear teacher and my friends.it’s a very interesting topic today.I think my Dad was a hero for me when I was a young child. We'd go fishing, walks, and other fun things for a kid. Every child has a good and great father, and so do I. My dad played a very important role in my daily life`````exactly speaking, in my past 16 years.My father always stands in the center of my life, from past till now and possibly in the future. When I was little, I did everything with my dad. You could always find me sitting on his knee or walking and doing everything with him. Every night he would read me a bed time story and make the voices of each character. I learnt a lot from my daddy. I learnt to never take things to seriously and to always smile. Like many other fathers, my dad and I also has generation gap. He is not good at or even can’t work the computer. So when I sitting at the computer desk,he will say something like ‘you should pay more attention to your study’, ‘don’t waste time on the computer games’ , ‘it will be bad for your eyes’ and so on. How can I- a computer fan – reduce time on computer? So I continue studying and playing on it Years pasted, my father is over 45 now. It is time for me to look after him and I am sure I will do and we will live an even better life. and i will say,i really love you dad,cause you are the hero in my mind.

这篇英语文章有什么语法错误Good morning,dear teacher and my friends.it’s a very interesting topic today.I think my Dad was a hero for me when I was a young child. We'd go fishing, walks, and other fun things for a kid. Every child ha
Good morning,dear teachers and friends.Today,I have a very interesting topic to share with you all and the subject is none other than my father.As a child,my father has always been a hero to me.We'd go fishing,walking,and do many other things that kids deem as fun together.Every child has a good and great father and so do I.My dad plays a very important role in my daily life for the past sixteen years since my birth.Whether it's in the past,the present,or the future,my life is centered around him.I did everything with my dad when I was a kid and you could always find me wherever he was.You'd find me sitting on his lap,walking hand in hand with him,and just everything we did we did together.Besides having fun with my dad,I've also learned many important life lessons from him.I've learned that you can't always take things too seriously and to always smile.Like many parents and their children,my father and I also have a generation gap.He is completely clueless when it comes to computers and it's the least he can do to get it to work.When I'm sitting in front of the computer screen he'll come up and say things like 'You should pay more attention to your studies','Don't waste time playing games on the computer','It's bad for your eyes' and the such.But how can a fully dedicated computer fan like me even bear to spend any less time than I have on my computer?So time goes by and many years have passed.Now my father is at age 45 and it's my turn to look after him.I'm sure that I will do an excellent job just as he did looking after me and our lives will be better than ever.One thing that will never change no matter how many years have passed is that my father will always be my hero no matter what and I have to say dad,I really love you.
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一开头介绍父亲时，就用的过去时，可中间又弄成了现在时。。统一就好了

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