帮我改改这短文,那里有错(英语),I like holiday,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock.After I had had breakfast,I ofent do my homework until lunch.I aways have lunch whith my family.My mother,my father

帮我改改这短文,那里有错(英语),I like holiday,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock.After I had had breakfast,I ofent do my homework until lunch.I aways have lunch whith my family.My mother,my father
帮我改改这短文,那里有错(英语),
I like holiday,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock.After I had had breakfast,I ofent do my homework until lunch.I aways have lunch whith my family.My mother,my father,my grendfather,my sister and I.In the afternoon,sometimes I sleep,and sometimes I play computer game or watch TV.At half past five,We have our dinner.Then I do some homework or go shopping.In the evening I ofent watch TV,Then sleep.
Sometimes I go to shopping whith my friend all day.sometimes I would the area friend's house play all day,sometimes swiming.
This is my summer holiday.
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帮我改改这短文,那里有错(英语),I like holiday,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock.After I had had breakfast,I ofent do my homework until lunch.I aways have lunch whith my family.My mother,my father
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I like holiday,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock.After I had had breakfast,I often do my homework until lunch.I aways have lunch whith my family.My mother,my father,my grendfather,my sister and I.In the afternoon,sometimes I sleep,and sometimes I play computer game or watch TV.At half past five,We have our dinner.Then I do some homework or go shopping.In the evening I often watch TV,Then sleep.
Sometimes I go to shopping whith my friend all day.sometimes I would go to the area friend's house play all day,sometimes go swimming.
This is my summer holiday.

I like holidays,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock. I ofent do my homework before lunch. I aways have lunch whith my families, mymother,my father,my grendfath...

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I like holidays,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock. I ofent do my homework before lunch. I aways have lunch whith my families, mymother,my father,my grendfather,my sister and me. In the afternoon,sometimes I am sleeping, playing computer games and watching TV. At half past five,we will have our dinner.Then I do some homework or go shopping.In the evening I often watch TV before sleep. Sometimes I go to shopping whith my friends all day, sometimes I would go swiming.
This is my summer holiday.
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1.After that(你少了) I had had breakfast
2.sometimes swiming 改为 sometimes go swimming(游泳的现在进行时要后面的m要双写)
3.sometimes I would the area friend's house play 改为sometimes I would go to the area friend's house to play
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