英语作文评析,请指出错误,正文如下,好的有追加,Yesterday,Xiao Ming went to school on foot.The time was too early and his mind was very happy.Suddenly,he saw a little girl crying in the corner.She was lost her mother.Xiao Ming helped

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英语作文评析,请指出错误,正文如下,好的有追加,Yesterday,Xiao Ming went to school on foot.The time was too early and his mind was very happy.Suddenly,he saw a little girl crying in the corner.She was lost her mother.Xiao Ming helped

英语作文评析,请指出错误,正文如下,好的有追加,Yesterday,Xiao Ming went to school on foot.The time was too early and his mind was very happy.Suddenly,he saw a little girl crying in the corner.She was lost her mother.Xiao Ming helped
英语作文评析,请指出错误,正文如下,好的有追加,
Yesterday,Xiao Ming went to school on foot.The time was too early and his mind was very happy.Suddenly,he saw a little girl crying in the corner.She was lost her mother.Xiao Ming helped she found her mother,they were very grated for him and that made Xiao Ming felt very happy.

英语作文评析,请指出错误,正文如下,好的有追加,Yesterday,Xiao Ming went to school on foot.The time was too early and his mind was very happy.Suddenly,he saw a little girl crying in the corner.She was lost her mother.Xiao Ming helped
1.The time was too early and his mind was very happy.应该为:It was too early and he was very happy.
2.in the corner应该为 in a corner of the street.The 这个冠词表特指,必须要有背景,而这里之前并没提到这个corner.
3.She was lost her mother应该为She was lost and can't find her mother.
4.Xiao Ming helped she found her mother应将found改为find,因为help 的用法是help sb do sth用动词原形.she 应该为her,因为这里的help 后跟的是宾语,要用宾格而不是主格.
5.第四点的句子后用句号,下一句开头首字母大写,因为Xiao Ming helped she found her mother这一句是个完整的句子.
6.they were very grated for him应该为They were very grateful.
7.把倒数第三个单词改为feel,因为“make”的用法是make sb do sth.

he was in a very good mind
She was lost by her mother.
Xiao Ming helped her to find her mother.
they were very grateful for him .
made Xiao Ming feel very happy

his mind was very happy 有点中文化

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