短文改错 Doctors in China are battling to save the life of a two-year-old girl,who she was hit byDoctors in China are battling to save the life of a two-year-old girl,who she was hit by two vans and left to die by over a dozen passer-by.The recen

短文改错 Doctors in China are battling to save the life of a two-year-old girl,who she was hit byDoctors in China are battling to save the life of a two-year-old girl,who she was hit by two vans and left to die by over a dozen passer-by.The recen
短文改错 Doctors in China are battling to save the life of a two-year-old girl,who she was hit by
Doctors in China are battling to save the life of a two-year-old girl,who she was hit by two vans and left to die by over a dozen passer-by.The recent reports show her condition has worsened.Last week,Yueyue was striking by two separate vehicles in the city of foshan.Seven minutes before she had been hit by traffic,several people witnessed the accident and did not help.A local woman who is a refused-collector picked her up and placing her against a bag of rice.Yueyue's rescuer had since been trouble by the media and his reported to have fled his home.This incident makes us think why a number people ignored the little clear injured girl as she lay bleeding on the ground.

短文改错 Doctors in China are battling to save the life of a two-year-old girl,who she was hit byDoctors in China are battling to save the life of a two-year-old girl,who she was hit by two vans and left to die by over a dozen passer-by.The recen
Doctors in China are battling to save the life of a two-year-old girl,who was hit by two vans and left to die by over a dozen passers-by.The recent reports show her condition has been worsening.Last week,Yueyue was struck by two separate vehicles in the city of foshan.Seven minutes after she was hit by traffic,several people witnessed the accident and did not help.A local woman,who is a refused-collector,picked her up and placed her against a bag of rice.Yueyue's rescuer had since been troubled by the media and she reported to have fled her home.This incident makes us think why a number of people ignored the little clear injured girl as she lie bleeding on the ground.

1. who 后的she删掉

2. to die改为dead

3. Seven minutes这个句子我觉得写的不好。。请楼主把想要表达的意思用汉语告诉我

4. refused-collector。。有这个词么= =，pick up的话怎么解释呢？我觉得我个人倾向于用save之类的

   。。。剩下的干脆...

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   1. who 后的she删掉

   2. to die改为dead

   3. Seven minutes这个句子我觉得写的不好。。请楼主把想要表达的意思用汉语告诉我

   4. refused-collector。。有这个词么= =，pick up的话怎么解释呢？我觉得我个人倾向于用save之类的

      。。。剩下的干脆楼主直接汉语说出来吧，我给你翻译好了，感觉之后的几句话是拼凑出来的= = 楼主这样写英语短文可不行啊

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   （1）she去掉 定语从句（2）passers—by(3) struck（4）and改but（5）placed（6）不会了 有难度 我仔细看看 楼下喳喳回答 嗯 （6）trouble改troubled（7）那个before改为after（8） 看不出来了 哎 看不出来了 改出来七个 这七个应该没什么问题的

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   中国的医生们正在尽全力抢救一位两岁女孩儿的生命，该女孩儿在被两辆箱式小货车撞了后被丢在那里等死，十多人路过竟无人相救。近期报道说她的状况恶化了。悦悦上周在佛山市被两辆汽车撞伤。在她被过往车流撞上七分钟前，好几个人目睹了事故发生而未伸出援手。当地一位被停止收废品的妇女把她扶起来并让她背靠着一袋大米。悦悦的救命恩人此后一直受到媒体的困扰，据说他已经离开自己的家。这一事件使得我们思考一个问题:为什么在她躺在地上流血时许多人对这个清醒的受伤的小女孩儿却置之不理？！

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